How's My Driving?

Please feel free to leave me criticism so that I may do a better job playing Keith! I do not think him my best muse or that I have the BEST grasp on his voice, so any feedback is welcome! I cannot emphasize enough how important CONSTRUCTIVE crit is, and examples to back it up. Remember, everyone has their own personal opinions on characterization, and I think every single one is important, even if I do not agree with what you have to say.

Comments that contain anything without construction will be ignored, or most likely deleted on sight. If you cannot conduct yourself in a respectful manner, than I will not consider what you have to say worth acknowledging.

Thank you!

P.S. All comments are screened and anonymous posting is on. c: